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Fic: Rituals (for winners and losers), NC17, HP, H/D, Losing Series IV
Author: unhappyhippo
Title: Rituals (for winners and losers)
Pairing: H/D
Disclaimer: I happily acknowledge that JK Rowling owns these characters. Because, you know, she's touchy like that.
Rating: NC17
Warnings: D/s, underage, spanking, orgasm denial, toys, PWP
Author's notes: Not compliant with book 5 and beyond, and set before that. Part of the kink series "Losing". Sequel to Win or Lose, Losing by Degrees and Losing His Mind
Summary: The morning after, some rituals are set...
Teaser: “Don’t imagine you’ll ever get to come those mornings,” Harry went on, voice deep and rough. “But you’ll be in this room every Friday night at ten sharp as well, for a proper session, and you might get to come then, or maybe once over the weekend, but I wouldn’t count on it.”


***

It had taken Draco a long time to get to sleep last night.

His arse had still been burning from the hard paddling, and his hole had been sore and tender from where Harry had reamed his arse relentlessly, hard and long and deep.

But that hadn’t been what had kept him awake.

His cock had taken well over an hour to subside and had still been aching dully even when exhaustion finally pulled him into sleep. He hadn’t really minded, though, if he was honest, laying awake, careful not to squirm or fidget too much with Harry sleeping peacefully behind him, breath warm against Draco’s neck, one arm slung casually over his hip and dick nestled snugly between Draco’s cheeks.

So he was kind of reluctant to wake up, but the hard cock rubbing up against him was pretty compelling and his own dick was already hard again.

“Time for your morning spanking,” Harry said softly into Draco’s ear.

Draco groaned, his arse was still sore, but his cock hardened even more.

“Every school morning from now on I want you in this room half an hour before breakfast, with your knickers round your ankles and your bare arse up over that spanking bench.”

The room had a number of toys and equipment Draco hadn’t really dared investigate too much, but he had noticed the spanking bench right by the door.

“I’ll come and give your naughty arse its well-deserved spanking every morning,” Harry continued, “and turn your sweet, white little bum a nice, bright red. I think you’ll be a lot nicer every day with a hot bottom to remind you to be, don’t you?”

Draco moaned and his hips shifted unconsciously, thrusting his hard dick into the empty air.

“You’d better make sure your hole is already well-lubed every morning as well, because if I decide to fuck you after, I won’t wait for niceties.

“Although, often you won’t deserve to have that hungry little hole fucked, of course, so then I’ll just put you on your knees after your spanking, and fuck your pretty, tear-stained face instead.”

Draco shivered.

“Don’t imagine you’ll ever get to come those mornings,” Harry went on, voice deep and rough. “But you’ll be in this room every Friday night at ten sharp as well, for a proper session, and you might get to come then, or maybe once over the weekend, but I wouldn’t count on it.”

Draco’s cock was so hard, he just moaned, but Harry landed a smack on his still sore arse.

“What do you say?”

“Yes, Harry,” seemed appropriate, and after a moment of silence he tried... “Thank you, Harry.”

“Good,” Harry said briskly, and then pulled away from Draco. Draco’s back felt cold after the warmth of Harry’s body pressed up against him. “Shoulders and knees,” he said, and Draco got quickly into position.

“Knees spread, Draco. I shouldn’t have to tell you that,” Harry sounded disapproving, and Draco hastened to obey, spreading his thighs apart until they strained.

Harry reached between his legs and wrapped a hand around his aching balls.

Draco groaned, he needed to come so badly, but just buried his head further into the pillow.

“Your balls are nice and full,” Harry said, like Draco had somehow missed that fact. “Aching for me.” Harry ran a gentle finger over the metal band that bore the initials HP that magically and physically restrained Draco’s cock.

Harry let him go and got up off the bed.

Draco held his breath as the already hated paddle Harry had used last night cracked down on his arse. He yelped. He was still pretty sore from yesterday.

“Hmm,” Harry mused, running his hand over the hot spot on Draco’s arse, “this paddle’s marks last overnight. Good to know – looks like your arse will always bear my marks from now on.”

Harry gave him a good, hard paddling while Draco yelped and squirmed. After six he was gasping and sniffling, and after 12 he was crying quietly into the pillow, his arse hot and burning.

Harry stopped and Draco raised his head hopefully, but Harry just laughed.

“We’re not done yet,” he said, a wicked grin in his voice. “Don’t you dare try and close your legs.”

Draco cried out as the paddle cracked down on the tender skin of his left inner thigh.

“OW. FUCK.”

Harry just laughed and the paddle cracked down again on his right thigh.

There were four more spanks – two on each thigh – before Harry was satisfied.

“There we go,” Harry said, sounding pleased. “You’ll want to be keeping your legs spread now, so you’ll always be nicely spread and ready for me.”

Harry threw the paddle down, and then relaxed back onto the bed, stretching out, hands behind his head on the pillows, gloriously naked.

Draco hadn’t had a chance to really see Harry before, and he looked his fill; Harry was pale – only slightly less so than Draco under his clothes, although his face and hands were tanned – and while he was a little bony, his frame was tightly muscled; the slim, fit physique of a seeker. Harry’s cock was big and half-hard, thick against his thigh and Draco’s mouth watered.

“Come over here, slut,” Harry said, and his voice sounded lazy, and even a little warm. “Suck my cock and get it hard and wet for you.”

Draco shuffled awkwardly down Harry’s body, settling with his knees on either side of Harry’s legs and he bent down to take Harry’s cock in his mouth.

He closed his eyes as he sucked, trying to lose himself in the feeling of Harry thick and hard in his mouth, but his own cock throbbed unbearably between his legs, and he wanted so badly...

Harry’s cock hardened quickly.

“Enough,” Harry said, voice rough. “I don’t see why I should do all the work all the time, though. Get up here and sit on my cock.”

Flushing, Draco shuffled up and over Harry‘s body – ungainly in his desperate arousal. He settled his knees either side of Harry’s hips.

He reached behind him to work Harry into his body, hissing slightly as Harry’s cock breeched the entrance – because he was still slick from last night, but likewise still sore from last night – and that made Harry smirk.

He hissed again as he settled down on Harry’s hips, because it made his tender, spanked thighs rub against Harry’s.

“Fuck yourself,” Harry commanded, eyes locked on Draco’s.

Draco began to move, gasping softly as he rode up and down on Harry’s cock, the penetration deep and making his cock leak with need. Harry had always taken him from behind until now, and it was strangely intense to be facing him. Draco flushed, feeling horribly exposed, he’d been stupid to sit this way round, but it was too late now, so he just closed his eyes.

“Look at me.”

Of course.

Draco opened his eyes, and looked at Harry. Harry’s face was flushed, and his breath coming in pants.

Draco moved his hand up to do... what? He had no idea, so he let it drop back. Usually his hands were busy stopping his face from hitting the floor, or holding on to pillows or benches and he suddenly felt oddly awkward, his hands suddenly restless.

“Pinch your nipples,” Harry said.

Draco obeyed. His nipples had never been particularly sensitive before, but his skin was so over-sensitised, it had been so long, that he gasped again and arched his back.

“Harder,” Harry’s hips were beginning to thrust now, moving up to meet Draco, and his hands settled on Draco’s hips. “If they aren’t red and sore looking when we finish, I’m going to use clamps.”

Draco bit his lip as he pinched and squeezed, little sparks of pain and pleasure from his nipples joining with the sensation of being fucked. Harry was doing most of the work now, and Draco threw his head back, closing his eyes unthinkingly, and whimpering in pain and pleasure as Harry fucked him, merciless against his prostate, forcing his body wide open for cock.

Harry came, and Draco kept his eyes closed, blood pounding, his cock a torment between his thighs.

He squealed as Harry’s hand closed around his dick, and his eyes flew open.

Harry grinned up at him and squeezed.

Draco’s eyes rolled back in his head.

“Please, Harry, please,” he gasped, finding his voice suddenly, conscious of his bitten lips. “Please, please let me come, please.”

“Not yet.”

Draco groaned, and, to his horror, he felt tears leak out of his eyes, “Please, please, I need it, I need it, please...”

“You don’t need it,” Harry said, firmly, and he pushed Draco off.

Draco whined as Harry’s cock slipped free – he was sore from being fucked hard last night and this morning.

“Sore?” Harry asked, reading his mind. “Good. Get back on your shoulders and knees.”

Sniffling, Draco got back into position, burying his face in the pillow and leaving his sore arse in the air, spreading his thighs wide without being told. His cock was so hard, he could barely believe it. Every breath seemed to make it worse.

He heard Harry whisper a spell, and invisible bonds tightened around his wrists, elbows, knees and ankles, holding him in place against the bed.

“That’s it,” Harry’s voice was rough and almost slurred, “that’s how sluts like you should always look, isn’t it? Spanked arses hot and red from being reminded of their place; holes on display, slick and sore from the hard fuckings they’re so desperate for;” Harry moved between Draco’s legs and reached to squeeze his balls gently, “balls swollen and aching because sluts don’t often deserve to come; and cocks hard and leaking to show how grateful they are for such treatment.”

Draco’s throat felt raw as he groaned, cock throbbing even harder at Harry’s words.

“I’m going to go to breakfast now, and I’ll bring some back for you,” Harry continued, and Draco heard the sounds of him getting dressed.

“When I come back, we’ll see about letting you rub that poor, little dick against something ‘til you come, and then when you’re quivering and half-conscious with the pleasure of it, I’ll spread your legs and fuck you again.

“In the meantime, though...”

Draco gasped and his head shot up as something slick and hard pressed into his body. He looked back and long, black dildo was pushing into his arse. Harry was still getting dressed, and the dildo was fucking him on its own, moving slowly in and out.

“...I’ll leave you like this.”

“No, Harry, please...”

“Yes. I want it to keep fucking you while I’m gone, because I want your hot little hole to be so sore that you can’t stop those sweet little whimpers you make when it’s just all too much, when I sink my cock into you again. I’m just going to keep your arse so sore from now on, from spanking and fucking, you’ll never forget who owns it.”

And with that Harry left, leaving Draco whimpering; his cock hard and aching and his arse getting well-fucked; waiting helpless and desperate.

***

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tikaya From: tikaya Date: December 14th, 2010 10:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh. My. God! Great installment Hon! This was beyond hot!! Can't wait for more... Because, clearly, there must be more... Right?? *grins hopefully* -Tikaya
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 14th, 2010 10:52 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks, m'dear!

So glad you liked!

Well... there's always a good reason to be cruel to Draco, right? Right?! ;)
pixmagic From: pixmagic Date: December 14th, 2010 11:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh my god~ That was fanstic! I don't think I've read your other ones, so now I will have to! :P Come up with the other soon!
pixmagic From: pixmagic Date: December 14th, 2010 11:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
*fantastic lol~
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 15th, 2010 06:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! Glad you liked! Hopefully there will be more...
monster_o_love From: monster_o_love Date: December 15th, 2010 12:54 am (UTC) (Link)
GUHHHH!!!!! Dear Lord, I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!! *does happy dance for the update!!!* Despite the tears, I think Draco's really pretty happy with this situation... well, ok, he'll be MORE happy when Harry gets back!! :D This is so Ridiculously Hot and Harry is just fantastically dominating. YUMMMMMM!!!!!
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 15th, 2010 06:55 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! SORRY for the length of time between updates, but I think Draco's still got more journey to go on so the next should be soon...

;)
monster_o_love From: monster_o_love Date: December 16th, 2010 03:22 am (UTC) (Link)
YAYY!!! I can't wait!!! :D
mesmerizemme From: mesmerizemme Date: December 15th, 2010 01:27 am (UTC) (Link)
Wow, spanking isn't my thing, but THIS beats whichever wet dream I could come up with for myself. I'm glad that Christmas inspires people in so many different ways))
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 15th, 2010 06:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! So glad you gave it a try, and found it to your liking! ;)
vanishingbee From: vanishingbee Date: December 15th, 2010 03:22 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh my! I'm so happy you've updated again, this was a simply delicious addition.
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 15th, 2010 06:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks, m'dear! SORRY it took so long. Hopefully more soon! :D
vanishingbee From: vanishingbee Date: December 15th, 2010 09:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yaaay! Since I cannot recall if I commented, I would most certainly also enjoy it if you were hit up by more Sam/Jess bugs. :DD
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 19th, 2010 12:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
I would most certainly also enjoy it if you were hit up by more Sam/Jess bugs

Gosh! That's a blast from the past! I do have the next one half finished on my hard drive, but I couldn't promise anything! ;)
vanishingbee From: vanishingbee Date: December 19th, 2010 09:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
:D Well that's fine, but having it as part of your thought processes is enough for me!
reicheruchan From: reicheruchan Date: December 15th, 2010 05:20 am (UTC) (Link)
oh my god... that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 15th, 2010 06:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! I really appreciate your comment! ;)
socherokee From: socherokee Date: December 15th, 2010 12:55 pm (UTC) (Link)
I cannot believe I just discovered your series now!
God, It is kinky. I really, really think there aren't enough D/s fics with Harry as the Dom, so Yay! :D
Can't wait for the next instalment.
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 15th, 2010 06:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! You, uh, may only just be seeing it because it's been two years since I updated it. Umm. *shuffles feet*

ANYWAY! Hopefully more soon! ;)
internet_self From: internet_self Date: December 17th, 2010 02:31 am (UTC) (Link)
Wow I love it! Brilliant descripton and writting. Will there be more?
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 19th, 2010 12:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! I hope there will be more very soon!
internet_self From: internet_self Date: December 20th, 2010 10:32 am (UTC) (Link)
me too!!
kradamgasm From: kradamgasm Date: December 18th, 2010 05:16 am (UTC) (Link)
unnnfff! That was BEYOND hot!

I've always shipped Harry/Draco since I was like 13. So for almost 6 years I've been waiting for something like this! Great job, bb!

Edited at 2010-12-18 05:16 am (UTC)
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: December 19th, 2010 12:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks, so glad you enjoyed it! H/D STILL works for me!
slowpoke15hi5 From: slowpoke15hi5 Date: December 24th, 2010 11:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
Damn! Poor Draco. Really wish you would write a part two so we can read about Draco releasing and having the orgasm of his life. But...dang! Very nice indeed :D
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: May 18th, 2011 01:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
There should be more, RL allowing... I can't leave them like this! ;)
idylliccliches From: idylliccliches Date: April 3rd, 2011 03:12 pm (UTC) (Link)
THIS IS THE HOTTEST THING I'VE EVER READ.
no exagerration.
Please update? This is too smexy not to be updated....
I feel almost blushy reading this though... my innocence >o< (not that there was much of it in the first place) har har
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: May 18th, 2011 01:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks!

I feel almost blushy reading this though... my innocence >o< (not that there was much of it in the first place) har har

LOL!
scarletscarlet From: scarletscarlet Date: June 8th, 2011 10:05 pm (UTC) (Link)
Good god, this is possibly the hottest thing in the universe :).
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: August 22nd, 2011 08:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! ;)
hollys_tree From: hollys_tree Date: August 22nd, 2011 09:51 am (UTC) (Link)
I really loved this series, it hits so many of my kink buttons! Chastity and orgasm denial –especially over a longer period of time– is one of my favourite things! I love that Draco isn't allowed to come here in the end, at least for now. ;)

The only thing I didn't feel a 100% comfortable with was the humiliation kink. I read it but prefer it to be part of a loving relationship. So I kind of wanted a few more glimpses or gentle touches that showed Harry cared.

Anyhow, I'm tracking this and if you should ever feel like writing another chapter... I'm here to read it!
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: August 22nd, 2011 08:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! If I do write more (I probably will) they will get to a proper relationship... eventually! ;)
ryo_akuinenn From: ryo_akuinenn Date: November 21st, 2011 03:40 am (UTC) (Link)
This is beyond hot. How I have never read this until now I have no idea.

More Please?
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: May 20th, 2012 08:35 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! More will, at some distant point, come! ;)
ryo_akuinenn From: ryo_akuinenn Date: November 30th, 2012 05:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
You have left Draco in that same way for two years. How about giving him a little love and let him come sometime soon? :-)
Amber Goodwin From: Amber Goodwin Date: August 13th, 2013 07:09 am (UTC) (Link)
3 years now, Harry really takes a long time to eat breakfast
luthiennolatari From: luthiennolatari Date: May 1st, 2012 06:39 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, please say you'll write more? This fic is so wonderfully kinky it leaves me aching for a session >.
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: May 20th, 2012 08:36 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! There will be more eventually... ;)
pekolin From: pekolin Date: May 12th, 2012 04:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
Jesus, this is really amazing and hot!!!
But I still feel sad for poor Draco, who seems to be just a trivial, worthless fucktoy to Harry……
I want to read that they get into proper relationship so badly! Please!
Anyway, thanks for creating and sharing this nice work :)
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: May 20th, 2012 08:37 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! When I do (finally) write more, there ought to be a relationship *fingers crossed*
mutualobsession From: mutualobsession Date: June 11th, 2012 10:41 am (UTC) (Link)
*please* write more...I hate WIP's...and it's
so-freaking-*hot*...and i *so* want this in my memories when you finish it.
<3
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: July 4th, 2012 05:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
Sorry! I wil do more, but I am as slow as molasses! ;)
runiechica From: runiechica Date: October 19th, 2012 08:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
This is amazingly hot!! I hope it's still on your to do list to write more! Mmmmm abused Draco is my current *favorite*
unhappyhippo From: unhappyhippo Date: October 20th, 2012 08:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! <3
renn_blackfur From: renn_blackfur Date: July 29th, 2013 12:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hot damn! This is gorgeous! And so, so, sooooooo hot!

“...I’ll leave you like this.”
I want it to keep fucking you while I’m gone, because I want your hot little hole to be so sore that you can’t stop those sweet little whimpers you make when it’s just all too much, when I sink my cock into you again. I’m just going to keep your arse so sore from now on, from spanking and fucking, you’ll never forget who owns it.”

*drools uncontrollably* These lines, ohgod, I'm seriously melting here.

Oh, and this part:
“that’s how sluts like you should always look, isn’t it? Spanked arses hot and red from being reminded of their place; holes on display, slick and sore from the hard fuckings they’re so desperate for;” Harry moved between Draco’s legs and reached to squeeze his balls gently, “balls swollen and aching because sluts don’t often deserve to come; and cocks hard and leaking to show how grateful they are for such treatment.”

FUCKING HOT!

And, well, all of it really. Come on, there has to be more, right? How about one of those school mornings? Or when Harry comes back with breakfast? My imagination is running wild - you've got to give us something!
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